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Retroactively titled "Mindfulness" - nightsong - 11-01-2012
February 28th, 1998
Remember the rainbow that danced across the sky?
The wave that flowed through the sand?
Remember the little bits of beauty that surround you?
For the same rain that grows the hay
will drown the rat
And the same sun that melts the ice
will harden the clay
It's the little details that make the whole
Yet they are forgotten, drifting in the wind.
Remember the beautiful sunset?
Did you notice the individual colors?
Details that form the whole
And sometimes,
The hardest lesson to learn,
Is the least complicated.
Re: Retroactively titled "Mindfulness" - Lurker.In.The.Night - 11-22-2012
That's beautiful. It's very well composed. It's unique and symmetrical and non-cliche.
Re: Retroactively titled "Mindfulness" - nightsong - 11-23-2012
Thank you Lurker
Re: Retroactively titled "Mindfulness" - Lurker.In.The.Night - 11-23-2012
(11-23-2012, 08:33 PM)nightsong link Wrote: Thank you Lurker
I lurk at your service.
