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A song of mine!!! - mr hide - 05-17-2009
Hi.Joined this forum today ;D Here's a song of mine i recorded a while ago(before my suicidal ideations came back to haunt me
)http://www.houndbite.com/?houndbite=7089
Re: A song of mine!!! - Dragon - 05-17-2009
Hello Mr Hide.
Welcome to the forum, sorry you feel the need to be here but glad you're here.
I listened to your houndbite, the music is really, really good - but you drown out the vocal (or at least I can't understand the words - could be me) I have that problem with some other music as well.
Nice introduction //al
Re: A song of mine!!! - Thistle - 05-17-2009
(05-17-2009, 05:57 PM)mr hide link Wrote: Hi.Joined this forum today ;D Here's a song of mine i recorded a while ago(before my suicidal ideations came back to haunt me
http://www.houndbite.com/?houndbite=7089
that was excellent! seriously, wow, what a voice!
may i ask why one of your tags was "jolyon"?
:ht:
Re: A song of mine!!! - Cordelia - 05-18-2009
you have an amazing voice!!
seriously no pun intended, i would die to have a voice like that.
you have quite a talent and the music is really good.
I'd love to see the lyrics because i can't hear your voice clearly.
Thanks for sharing!!
best wishes,
Cordelia
Re: A song of mine!!! - JenniLynne - 05-18-2009
Wow....... :APD: :APD: :APD: :APD: That was great..... The song is terrific...... Thank you so much for sharing...... :APD: :APD: :APD: :APD:
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni
Re: A song of mine!!! - Meliadus - 05-18-2009
That's amazing - you got real talent there.
:APD:
Re: A song of mine!!! - mr hide - 05-18-2009
Thanks everyone for your comments ;D Musics is about all i've got right now
Here are the lyrics:-
Nervous,it's a weakness
A twitching play on my self doubt
It's not worthwile to remind me that
I've no place in a faceless crowd
Last train to oblivion,race you
London lights blink ahead in chains
I'm so purile when i call you later
To read someone else's lines
Tearing up photographs you loved
To me they're just stains from a past
Left me no place in your black heart
Words with the depth of a cheap cable talent show
In spite of myself i'll break down and make a scene
Nerves that are consuming me
Nerves that sap my energy
I couldn't stand it,i couldn't get myself across
And it's futile,your cliched sentiments forced smiles
I'll console myself on the grounds...that
There's not a saviour who can save my soul
Not a saint on the ropes who can take all your low blows
And i was immune before he lay in your bed
Now it hurts like an open sore
In spite of myself i'll break down and cause a scene
You took my dignity
You took my worth from me
I'll make this fiction like your name
Re: A song of mine!!! - mr hide - 05-18-2009
Oh Thistle,Jolyon is my name;I couldn't be a***sed thinking of tags,so i just included my name
Re: A song of mine!!! - mr hide - 05-18-2009
Some amazing poetty here.Maybe someone would like to collaberate with me and make a song? ;D
Re: A song of mine!!! - Thistle - 05-18-2009
(05-18-2009, 03:20 PM)mr hide link Wrote: Oh Thistle,Jolyon is my name;I couldn't be a***sed thinking of tags,so i just included my name
i have a very close friend named jolyon....i had never seen anyone else with his name is why i asked....
:ht: