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I put off posting this - EyeScream - 06-17-2009
because I couldn't think of a title.
I still can't.
So I decided to ask you all for suggestions instead.
Here we go now, Here we go
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Untitled [sup]© 2007, EyeScream[/sup]
The idea for this poem
Was long ago locked up
In a vault,
In the corner,
Of a room,
In the under ground,
Of a seldom visited
Museum.
So if you should disagre-a
Remember, it wasn't my idea
I'm thinking of the mudslide
That caused its walls to crumble.
Such an event should not be a
Precipitate to a poem
But this one let loose an idea
From the cellar of that museum.
It started with a rumble,
Then changed to a lightning flash...
And I thought Wow, that was fast.
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Please don't ask me what it means... I don't know.
But it really needs a title, so I could use your thoughts.
Re: I put off posting this - snuggles - 06-17-2009
precipitate
is an awesome word.
Re: I put off posting this - Sadstguy - 06-18-2009
(06-17-2009, 07:32 AM)snuggles link Wrote: precipitate
is an awesome word.
Yeah, but it ain't part of the solution!
Re: I put off posting this - Cordelia - 01-31-2010
Just came across your poem,
love the imagery and the idea of a Museum as part of a poem is new to my mind but very
interesting.
have you come up with a title?
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- i must have missed when i was'nt on CSS as much-
thanks for sharing your work,
I liked reading it :APD:
Re: I put off posting this - EyeScream - 01-31-2010
(01-31-2010, 07:40 PM)Cordelia link Wrote: have you come up with a title?
no :-\