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The Weight - iocaine0351 - 09-02-2009
With my dull knife
I etched
a notch in the cord.
Slowly, painfully
I carved away
the trust
exposing the hurt beneath.
The weight on the other end
proved to be too much,
straining
until finally,
with a groan,
the
cord
snapped.
Re: The Weight - JenniLynne - 09-02-2009
(09-02-2009, 01:57 AM)iocaine0351 link Wrote: With my dull knife
I etched
a notch in the cord.
Slowly, painfully
I carved away
the trust
exposing the hurt beneath.
The weight on the other end
proved to be too much,
straining
until finally,
with a groan,
the
cord
snapped.
I like this quite a bit iocane..... Thanks for sharing it with us.....
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni