An Agnostic at the Bus Stop
Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.
That's very good for something that short. Thank you for sharing that with us all.
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(05-01-2009, 01:12 PM)mimi.bo link Wrote: An Agnostic at the Bus Stop
Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.
That was very lovely..... Thank you so much for sharing your creativity......
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni
The Eleventh Doctor: Nobody important? Blimey, that's amazing. You know that in nine hundred years of time and space and I've never met anybody who wasn't important before.
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Wow. I really like your composition !
If you want to share any more of your works, I would certainly look forward to it.
Take care,
Ez
All human beings should try to learn before they die what they are running from, and to, and why.<br /> - James Thurber
Thanks, Ez! I might do just that.
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Beautiful verse, wonderful imagery. :APD:
wonderful writing
:APD:
thanks for sharing,
best wishes,
Isabella