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An Agnostic at the Bus Stop

Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.
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#2
That's very good for something that short.  Thank you for sharing that with us all.
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#3
(05-01-2009, 01:12 PM)mimi.bo link Wrote: An Agnostic at the Bus Stop

Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.



That was very lovely..... Thank you so much for sharing your creativity......


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni
The Eleventh Doctor: Nobody important? Blimey, that's amazing. You know that in nine hundred years of time and space and I've never met anybody who wasn't important before.
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#4
Thank you both.
Smile
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#5
Wow.  I really like your composition !

If you want to share any more of your works, I would certainly look forward to it.  Smile

Take care,

Ez
All human beings should try to learn before they die what they are running from, and to, and why.<br /> - James Thurber
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#6
Thanks, Ez! I might do just that.
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#7
Beautiful verse, wonderful imagery.  :APD:
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#8
Thanks very much!  Smile
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#9
wonderful writing

:APD:

thanks for sharing,

best wishes,
Isabella
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