05-15-2009, 10:27 PM
I was told that this one I had posted before was not read by anyone because of the title, so I'm posting the English translation of the title as the Subject. Let's see what happens...
Deus et natua non faciunt frusta
(God and nature do not work together in vain)
Yahweh, Loki--are you one?
Or are The Gods just having their fun?
Sorry, Chance; this is too big for you--
It was obviously planned by someone who knew
Exactly where to slice and stab and tear
To cause me pain and leave me bare.
But such sadistic cruelty's beyond divine.
And made with care,
A custom gift that is only mine!
It must be one grand joke.
Why am I not laughing?
Copyright é 2009 Sadstguy
All Rights Reserved and all that.
The meter is horribly odd, I know.
Suggestions to improve the work?
Thanks!
--S
Deus et natua non faciunt frusta
(God and nature do not work together in vain)
Yahweh, Loki--are you one?
Or are The Gods just having their fun?
Sorry, Chance; this is too big for you--
It was obviously planned by someone who knew
Exactly where to slice and stab and tear
To cause me pain and leave me bare.
But such sadistic cruelty's beyond divine.
And made with care,
A custom gift that is only mine!
It must be one grand joke.
Why am I not laughing?
Copyright é 2009 Sadstguy
All Rights Reserved and all that.
The meter is horribly odd, I know.
Suggestions to improve the work?
Thanks!
--S