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03-19-2010, 12:11 AM (This post was last modified: 03-19-2010, 12:13 AM by ogimyto.)
I want to describe an apple as red, and juicy,
And not think about the connotation of the apple,
The seeds inside or the tree from which it fell.
I don't want to care about the value of its entropy,
or Original Sin.
I want to enjoy the apple without syntax.
oh what fun it would be to blow my mind and fall into the sun
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simple poem - by ogimyto - 03-19-2010, 12:11 AM
Re: simple poem - by Lurker.In.The.Night - 04-29-2010, 04:28 PM
Re: simple poem - by Cordelia - 03-20-2010, 12:52 PM
Re: simple poem - by ogimyto - 03-20-2010, 01:22 PM

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