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simple poem
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...some thoughts that come to my mind..
It brings to  mind the loss of innocence I have with the world.
After my first contact with people, fruit, "inanimate" objects,
I have knowledge and I create meanings and devices to get what I want.
For childhood innocence is lost.
The only way I know how to experience something fresh, be as it may, in a fractured way
is through presence or being in the moment.


Your poem is very interesting,
Thanks for sharing, I hope the apple sauce tasted good  Smile

with best wishes
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simple poem - by ogimyto - 03-19-2010, 12:11 AM
Re: simple poem - by Lurker.In.The.Night - 04-29-2010, 04:28 PM
Re: simple poem - by Cordelia - 03-20-2010, 12:52 PM
Re: simple poem - by ogimyto - 03-20-2010, 01:22 PM

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