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[JenniLynne]

It's beautiful..... Both versions..... The French language sounds so pretty...... Thanks for sharing......


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni

[Cordelia]

rolling,

you are so talented,
mon Dieu!

you write with such beauty, i find myself
drawing breath after each line.

wonderful  :ht: :ht: :ht:

i hope you allow the gift of  :APD:

[Cordelia]

this person who you perceive as having more talent than you,
can you send me a link to his work?
.... because it's not often that art takes my breath away


a person once told me that comparison's are odius.

....I read Pablo Neruda .... once tried to write a poem like him and it was not good...but this is all part of a journey to find a voice
one can call one's own. I was reading his poetry and Elma Mitchells poetry today
and i felt envious. then I am aware of what I am missing.
Not only am i missing the beauty that is their poetry, but also
i deny myself for the future, a degree of freedom in my writing.

I am still trying to understand how to give voice to myself.

there is only one person who can write like you and
that's you. I think your poetry is amazing and as I recall I am not alone in this, not by any means

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