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Retroactively titled "Mindfulness"
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February 28th, 1998



Remember the rainbow that danced across the sky?

The wave that flowed through the sand?

Remember the little bits of beauty that surround you?

For the same rain that grows the hay

will drown the rat

And the same sun that melts the ice

will harden the clay

It's the little details that make the whole

Yet they are forgotten, drifting in the wind.

Remember the beautiful sunset?

Did you notice the individual colors?

Details that form the whole

And sometimes,

The hardest lesson to learn,

Is the least complicated.
Quote:"You'd be a lot safer & a lot happier if you were dumber."- My Therapist
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#2
That's beautiful. It's very well composed. It's unique and symmetrical and non-cliche.
"I want to thrive, not just survive." - Thrive, Switchfoot
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#3
Thank you Lurker
Quote:"You'd be a lot safer & a lot happier if you were dumber."- My Therapist
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(11-23-2012, 08:33 PM)nightsong link Wrote: Thank you Lurker

I lurk at your service.  Wink
"I want to thrive, not just survive." - Thrive, Switchfoot
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