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Moving
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(05-16-2009, 12:50 PM)liz link Wrote: they're beautiful...

Thank you.  Smile

Apparently, a friend (Kay Flood) didn't appreciate them, because she sent me these re-writes...

MOVING ON

One last glance
    before closing the door
    on old baggage.
    Sealing the last box,
encasing the memories worth taking to new horizons.


Timely Interment

From within the sealed boxes
  I hear the moans of failed neuroses.
  Gnashing their teeth at their failure
  To prevent my growth and happiness.
Perhaps, not yet dead, but happily well on their way.
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Moving - by Sadstguy - 05-11-2009, 12:04 PM
Re: Moving - by Sadstguy - 05-15-2009, 10:08 PM
Re: Moving - by Sadstguy - 05-15-2009, 10:11 PM
Re: Moving - by liz - 05-16-2009, 12:50 PM
Re: Moving - by Sadstguy - 05-18-2009, 08:50 PM
Re: Moving - by JenniLynne - 05-11-2009, 01:03 PM
Re: Moving - by Sadstguy - 05-11-2009, 10:38 PM
Re: Moving - by Dragon - 05-11-2009, 11:18 PM
Re: Moving - by MindCubicle - 05-11-2009, 11:32 PM

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