Just a thought

[JenniLynne]

More or less less than more. It's always the problem of translation ... ???
Thant you very much for yours comment's. 


At the hour or
— The first slice —
Of a hawthorn open to its beak
The boned hive

— My step —
Hurried — The sunflower
Unpacks his blanket to the blow of a
Buzzard

Your translation sounds much better than the one I got..... Thanks for sharing it.... The French is pretty.......


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni