A song of mine!!!

[mr hide]

Hi.Joined this forum today ;D Here's a song of mine i recorded a while ago(before my suicidal ideations came back to haunt me )
http://www.houndbite.com/?houndbite=7089

[Dragon]

Hello Mr Hide.

Welcome to the forum, sorry you feel the need to be here but glad you're here.

I listened to your houndbite, the music is really, really good - but you drown out the vocal (or at least I can't understand the words - could be me) I have that problem with some other music as well.

Nice introduction //al

[Thistle]

Hi.Joined this forum today ;D Here's a song of mine i recorded a while ago(before my suicidal ideations came back to haunt me )
http://www.houndbite.com/?houndbite=7089

that was excellent!  seriously, wow, what a voice!

may i ask why one of your tags was "jolyon"?

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[Cordelia]

you have an amazing voice!!

seriously no pun intended, i would die to have a voice like that.
you have quite a talent and the music is really good.
I'd love to see the lyrics because i can't hear your voice clearly.

Thanks for sharing!!

best wishes,
Cordelia

[JenniLynne]

Wow....... :APD: :APD: :APD: :APD: That was great..... The song is terrific...... Thank you so much for sharing...... :APD: :APD: :APD: :APD:


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni

[Meliadus]

That's amazing - you got real talent there.

:APD:

[mr hide]

Thanks everyone for your comments ;D Musics is about all i've got right now
Here are the lyrics:-


Nervous,it's a weakness
A twitching play on my self doubt
It's not worthwile to remind me that
I've no place in a faceless crowd

Last train to oblivion,race you
London lights blink ahead in chains
I'm so purile when i call you later
To read someone else's lines

Tearing up photographs you loved
To me they're just stains from a past
Left me no place in your black heart
Words with the depth of a cheap cable talent show
In spite of myself i'll break down and make a scene

Nerves that are consuming me
Nerves that sap my energy
I couldn't stand it,i couldn't get myself across
And it's futile,your cliched sentiments forced smiles
I'll console myself on the grounds...that

There's not a saviour who can save my soul
Not a saint on the ropes who can take all your low blows
And i was immune before he lay in your bed
Now it hurts like an open sore
In spite of myself i'll break down and cause a scene

You took my dignity
You took my worth from me
I'll make this fiction like your name

[mr hide]

Oh Thistle,Jolyon is my name;I couldn't be a***sed thinking of tags,so i just included my name

[mr hide]

Some amazing poetty here.Maybe someone would like to collaberate with me and make a song? ;D

[Thistle]

Oh Thistle,Jolyon is my name;I couldn't be a***sed thinking of tags,so i just included my name

i have a very close friend named jolyon....i had never seen anyone else with his name is why i asked....

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